I loved this poem. How you described the fear of the unkown in the future and just hoping you do things right and have all u want and more. Very nice write. :-). I thought your thoughts were expressed very well and it conveyed emotion well.

This was a great poem. Liked how you described a show in here and a dance together. Nice write. :)

Thank you i need more good stuff in my life and ithink i found my seacert

Nice rhyming features that had me entertained and captivated. I enjoyed the message in this and you convey it beautifully. And the ending was wonderful.