Sorry wanted to be first lol

Love it, seriously! Absolutely amazing!
__________
Here it is:
Okay, I'll simply start with the daisy flower itself: in my opinion it seems rather simple, but I made some research and actually found exactly what I hoped and thought I'd find. On one side Daisy flowers symbolise innocence, patience and beauty, while on the other it's simplicity, purity and loyal love. I think that's what a friendship should be about, so I am really glad that you used this as comparison.

The title, obviously well chosen, daisy ring, now you're not only refering to the daisy flower itself, but also the ring, usually a symbol for eternity. I read that the daisy flower has been around for about 4000 years so both underline endlessness, which a friendship should be.

Usually there are parts I like better than others, but that is not the case here, I love it all, not only because of your choice of words or the message you convey, but because I feel like I can relate to your point of view so much and well it made me smile.

No need for : she loves me she loves
me not.
^ This part proves that you do not have to question your friends care for you, but are certain about it. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
I'd probably insert a comma between "she loves me[,] she loves me not" though.

You're great, your talent is beyond measureable and I absolutely love this poem.

Just one smartass comment:
"Secure in this special love
secure in it's strength, it blooms
a beautiful array of reliance."
^ it's should be its :P

TJ,

What a precious write of friendship and sweet sunshine... This piece is a floral decoration of wonderful words and an awesome form of expression.... love this piece!!

hugs,
Andrea

I so love your description of friendship as Daisy Ring.

It's like every one is a petal though the difference is that they are not wasted on plucking them, and the part of 'love you, love you not' just emphasizes your beautiful idea.

And... also, your thoughts on seeds and water is original. Amazing TJ :)

^^
ya I agree with u guys:)

My fav type of poems is friendship, I trully love this poem:).

Similar;
the ring of friendship is
an assortment of personalities
adhereing to it's center forming
allegience to each other.

^^
this is my fav stanza, and I love the idea of the poem:)

I really enjoyed reading the poem, 5/5:)

Brilliantly written by TJ yet again.
Amazing description and great comparsions.

5/5

-Heather

I will simply say I agree with all thats been said about this piece. Amazing job

TJ another awesome poem by you!
What a beautiful poem to describe a friendship ring and a daisy
Such gorgeous images.

A daisy ring is a cirlce of
pedals counting 34, assorted
colors forming a tight bond to
the center of the flower
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I love what you have started off with. The description of the beautiful flower.

Similar;
the ring of friendship is
an assortment of personalities
adhereing to it's center forming
allegience to each other
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I love how you then describe the ring itself and then compare the similarities

Unlike the flower where the
pedals are many, the number
is no less important , for true
allies are forged in love and trust.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
You have described the physical features of the flower and ring but here you say that it is not as important
as the friendship bond itself and how they were formed.

No need for : she loves me she loves
me not.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
How many times did I pick the petals off a flower and say the same thing.
It really brings me back to my child days

Secure in this special love
secure in it's strength, it blooms
a beautiful array of reliance.

Sow the seeds of friendship,
fertilize with forgiviness,
water with belief.

Like rays of the sun, shine
with warmth and passion.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
A beautiful ending to a beautiful poem

Awesome TJ

x

Sow the seeds of friendship,
fertilize with forgiviness,
water with belief.

^^
The people that are truly yours will never get lost to you;)

Lovely poem by you, T.

5/5 Ingrid

This poem flows so well. I loved how you kept things smiple as there is a beauty in simplicity.

Great poem

5/5

The following part caught my attention so much

"Unlike the flower where the
pedals are many, the number
is no less important , for true
allies are forged in love and trust."

This sentence are so TRUE!!! Friendship is base in love and specially in trust. Any relationship is base on communication but the trust is always the one that ruins it when it lacks it.

Well done, I mean more than well done.

amazing.

The ring of friendship is
an assortment of personalities
adhereing to its center forming
allegience to each other.

Just reading this stanza alone, wow. You have penned down a lovely poem that i found was deep and the thinking behind it was also deep for your choice of words and how you use them is wonderful.

Like the rays of the sun, shine
with warmth and passion.

^^this is my most favorite stanza but it's hard cuz I loved it all :) it's a fantastic great friendship poem and an amazing poem and excellently written :) 5/5

Beautifully true! I like this.