Sounds like a build up/climax as hours become minutes and the final line-leave me alone. X

Love is beautiful and its also painful....

There are dark times that we all go through... I find raw writes such as this are the most powerful.... Keep writing and expressing Ole...
touching write~

When we are depressed, all we want is to be alone. It's a time of questioning our merits. Good poem.

Maybe I'm wrong but I liked the wording in this :)
Repetition has never been a favorite of mine in poems but some just make it work. Good Job

Emty .. should be.. empty
hours is.. should be.. hours are

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I really get emotional when I read depression poems, for I feel depressed a lot..