"The rosy breeze" I really like the way you described things, I like the beautiful experience of nature, and admire the chosen name, MashaAllah, I really like the topic, and I.S.A always admire your poetry !

Awww! how sweet of you dear. Thanks, really appreciate you :-). Blessings

Wonderfully written. Am nominating this for sure..
i would suggest you remove some of the capital letters in the other lines coz i have noticed that its not another line rather a continuation of the previous one. That messes up the flow but apart from that, this piece is amazing.

Thanks loads for the comment, i'm glad. I'll edit it. Blessings :) ..

I almost didn't read this , I am one with animals as far as I could never kill one and at first I thought this would be one of those. I was happy to see it was a camera lens instead of a gun.

I think it's about the most awesome of all poems I read. You let us see not only through your eyes but the eyes of the deer.
Perfection my friend.

Ohh! such gladdening words. Animals are our best friends, we just need to know them better. Thanks alot for this heart touching comment, :-) ...

Serene and beautiful... I feel I get short of words when I want to comment your poems.... I loved the entire story you shared.... Wonderful:)