Comments : Fly high

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So sorrowful and heartbreaking! I really found myself related to it. First, the rhyming is perfect but each line is too long. But even though the simple message in each line is very strong. Second, each line should begin with a capital letter.
    This aside, I really enjoyed reading your work. Keep penning

  • 11 years ago

    by hehasmyheart

    Thanks

    • 11 years ago

      by hehasmyheart

      Ok no more english grammar i wrote this poem how i wanted it to be written im not trying to be rude but i dont need an english profectionist in my comments plz and thank you