Stanza 1
Nice introduction you have here. You express her love as being something that is a basis of good in your life. Even going ahead to express that shes heaven sent to set you free from troubles of this earth like sadness, sorrow..etc

Stanza 2
The imagery here is brilliant. your flow is wonderful. You tell us about your love who is your everything and one you can not live without, for without air, one would die and you compare her to the air you breath, very creative in this line and nice wording.

Stanza 3
You continue to amaze me with your words and imagery here. This was my fav stanza by the way. Rare as in there is not another like her in this world.Its like you are proclaiming how her love for you grows, how is sweeter to you each passing day.

Stanza 4
Her love is original and true. its more than you can wish for because she makes your wishes come true. Very good choice of words here and you still keep up the good flow from the beginning of the poem.

Stanza 5
the word untamed in this was creative. she is so very pure and original. She brings about happiness to not only you but those around her as well.

Stanza 6
Her beauty is divine. Her true nature, just the originality of this girl is like no other. She has not been corrupted by any man for she is pure and true.

Stanza 7
Dreams do come true to those who believe and it seems your came true in her. Shes a blessing a lot of people ask for but rarely get and to those who do get it, its indeed a blessing.

Stanza 8
No man has ever experienced this love you are sharing with her and you are lucky and blessed to be sharing it with her. A lady that was destined to be yours, it was fate that you found this rare beauty.

Stanza 9
Perfect ending to a well written poem. You will go ahead with your love, breaking all barriers. All this while, you will be with her, hand in hand.
5/5

Wow.. I am elated that you would leave such an epic review of my poem. Thank you so much!!

Randy

I compare her to the snow kissed hills

^ beautiful line..snow kissed hill was totally perfect word choice, i pictured just that!

She's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
A million saddened hearts could break,
and she could be the cure.

^^ Honestly randy, I teared up right there. That was soooooooo sweet omg I can't imagine a poem like these being dedicated to me. That was so beautifully said!!

For no mans traveled on the hills,
I'm blessed to journey through.
A promise land reserved for me,
lush, beautiful and new.

^ that was so precious...comparing the journey through the hills, to the journey your traveling with your lady. I absolutely loved it.

The story to this poem was just adorable and I added it to my favorites as well as nominating it! It deserves credit I just loved it!

Third stanza - like is capitalized and I can't really find a reason why, it caused me to go back and wonder if there was any importance, and it didn't seem there was, so I would change that to a lower case :) Also, sweater should be sweeter.

I feel some of the repetition throughout the poem wasn't really needed, as it didn't create a huge emphasis, but felt like you used them to keep it going a bit to another stanza. The second stanza in this piece was definitely my favorite, full of beauty and imagery. Well done.

I like this poem, its got a great ring to it when read out loud, you vocabulary is awesome, it makes the poem flow effortlessly, the imagery you created though clear, is strong.

"It's the rock of my foundation,
every time that she is near.
Making every fear I have in life,
completely disappear.

Her love it can't be broken down,
for its in its purest form.
And how does one describe a love,
that's completely out of norm."

that part was amazing, I don't know why but it speaks louder than any other part for me, perhaps its the imagery that makes it what it is. this is very well written. kudos.

And now we stand inside the door,
looking ...toward that world of white we go.
Holding hands to walk outside,

...to leave our footprints in the snow.

how beautiful, i almost cried...

this poem is so filled with emotion and deep. what a lucy girl to have such a beautiful poem written for her. and how rare it is for a guy to know he's lucky to have something so amazing.

5.5

This was adorable. seems like you understand someone special in a way deserving of beauty. great job man. splendid

What an exquisite write! So beautifully and softly written, telling of your ladys love for you :)

Beautiful images used to express this love. My favourite stanza :-

"As pure as crystal snow flakes,
that loft the winter air.
l liken her love to snow kissed hills,
with no footprints anywhere."

Ahhhh, your words delight the readers heart :))

Looking forward to reading more of yours ~ Olwin

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear.

~ This is amazing, being which the person you love can really chase all your fears away.

Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure.

~ Aww... this part is really very sweet. And I especially love the last part.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

~ I squealed at this part! This is so sweet and I can feel your love for the girl echoing in every part of your poem. 5/5!

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear.

~ This is amazing, being which the person you love can really chase all your fears away.

Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure.

~ Aww... this part is really very sweet. And I especially love the last part.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

~ I squealed at this part! This is so sweet and I can feel your love for the girl echoing in every part of your poem. 5/5!

"Her loves a fundamental,
Amazing and allure.
The prime of all essential gifts,
a radical and pure.

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear."
Aw this is so cute, I can tell you really adore this girl:)

"Her love, it can't be broken down,
it exists in purest form.
With all the chaos in existence,
she's the eye inside my storm."
I just love reading love poems and how people try to put love into words I love how people express this emotion and you have done a pretty dang good job!

"Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure."
This really made me smile:)

"Her loves as epic as the cosmos,
yet so intricate to me.
Through the window of my existence
she's the everything I see.

As pure as perfect snow flakes,
that loft the winter air.
She's the soft still gleam of snow kissed hills,
with no footprints anywhere."
Great imagery here amazing!

"And none hath traveled on those hills,
I'm blessed to journey through.
This promise land reserved for me,
that's beautiful and new.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow."
The ending was just beautiful, I really liked this poem!
5/5

Amazing, beautiful, wondrous. Just, wow. What a lucky lady to have recieved such a poem in her honor. :)

"Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure."

I loved this had to be my favorite stanza. Because it is how I feel about someone.

I thought this was a beautiful love piece,
The ending left me in wow

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

--it sounds refreshing and cool to me also calm. The details of holding hands and the images that it creates. I thought that was really well written.