Not cool, Holly. I'm bawling... This poem was so... Powerful... I think saying I'm bawling is enough... That was so sad, touching, heartfelt... Etc etc etc..

5/5

-Heather

Oh wow that is a great poem... a lot of emotion in it!! wonderful beautiful write. :)

Amazing, Beautiful and ever so Sad

:( no words left for me to say how beautiful however sad this poem is.... 5/5 for sure

Ohhhh this is so sad im speechless
This was such an amazing poem

I loved it
5/5 x

My heart goes out to her

This is a very thought provoking sad piece. In her petite mind, she still believes daddy will be back home in the long run, very depressing. Sooner or later the puzzle will form a shape; making her accept thier fate, he's no more but resting in peace. Simple words telling how the mindset of toddlers think and absorb situations. I admire such pieces about grievances of the demise of loved ones in wars, massacres, protests, et al. Vividly described like a play script. Exquisite, may the soul of those that passed on rest in peace, Amen(Ameen). Blessings, bye :).

An observation Holly; the 3rd stanza, last part of the 2nd line; i think you meant to use 'too', not to. Do crooscheck. Take care.

Omg i loved this...i can kinda relate with this because my dad passed away too... ohh this is so great

Awww this is sad but so great and powerful

i love it girly<3

keep on writing<3

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5/5