I so love this, enchanting much... especially how the scene where the two lovers are expecting a child felt.. such purity and organic emotions :)
amazing.

This is such a beautiful touching poem<3

Years has past shes doing just fine
Her voice brings fairytales to life at bedtime
With a smile and a kiss from her baby girl
she will never regret bringing her into the world.
-i love this part :). I can see this as she kisses her little girl, thanking god for her being in her plan.

I love love love this poem :)
amazing job
5/5

Tony, you've got some great lines in here, especially this one: "Half her smile could light up the sky."

Very touching and heart-felt.
I enjoyed it immensely.

My gosh this is amazing and the description is terrific. the word choice is awesome. Its short yet so fantastic. I agree with what the others have said too. Great piece

First I want to just point out minor typos :)
"God's Plan", Capitalization especially of titles is particularly important to the poems meaning, well, it's not always the case but since you've capitalized the first word, it would be best to capitalize them all.

Everyone said it will be tough, think whats right
^ what's

she know's the beautiful life is part of Gods plans.
^ knows

Years has past shes doing just fine
^she's

I told her if anything happened i would stay
^ I

im thankful everyday shes part of Gods plans.
^ I'm and she's

I know you're using your phone atm, so it's perfectly understandable =p

I think that this poem bears several meanings but your faith in God stands out. Your every piece always denotes powerful and intense emotion. Keep it up!

I am glad to read from you again!
This poem is really enchanting and it definately underlines how grateful we should be for everything great we recieve. I liked the story and thought that this poem had a good flow too.

I enjoyed each line. I can only agree with the above. Write on bro awesome work

This is a beautiful, touching, heartfelt poem that I really enjoyed reading.

I know seventeen is young to have a child but I guess God has planned this. Everything happens for a reason.

The rhyming is flawless and the flow of the poem is great.

Well done

x

5/5 very beautiful

I don't care much about the grammatical errors, since I'm sure with a little bit of research that could be fixed in no time. :) I can tell that you know how to bring forth emotion, and you sure are getting comfy in that rhyming structure, eh? =p To be honest I think I've read better rhymes by you, but I also have to admit that there's some little gems scattered about this piece. Such as: "Her voice brings fairytales to life at bedtime" or "Half her smile could light up the sky".

I agree with all of the above

This is so beautiful
How you wrote each line
I loved the read

Ahhh of course I'm going to give you 5/5

Just amazing blown away sweetie(:

GAAHHH. Your such a wonderful poet, Tony, I'm jealous!

The first stanza was amazing. As soon as I read the first few lines, I was flooded in emotions of happiness.

Half her smile could light up the sky
to see her little child with her lovers eyes.

^^^
These lines made the stanza stand out. The first two lines simply told me that a soon to be adult just had a baby. Then as I continued to read, I could feel the joy of the woman as she saw her beautiful baby.

Also, the second stanza was easy to understand. The flow of words made it poetic, but the happiness of proving everything wrong was what made it terrific.

To cut this comment short, the last two stanza's quickly moved down the life of the young woman and newly born baby. I could see the twinkling in the mother's eyes as she saw her package of joy growing up to be a gift sent from Heaven.

Well written poem , Tony. The love in this poem was stunning. :)

Beautiful and touching poem with a fantastic flow. this warmed my heart. :)