Comments : Love portion

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Its is full on rhythmic, we can sing it also.
    Nice

  • 8 years ago

    by Elizabeth Squires

    Good write! Thank for sharing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Best poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A rhythmic piece with plenty of beat. I can imagine it as an almost rapping piece. Very enjoyable. Milly x