Death

by Salina Is Beautiful   Jan 27, 2012


Dark loving heart
Every heart bleeding
A razor to bleed
To never be seen again
Hell

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  • 13 years ago

    by keith

    You need more words to make this more powerful.

    but either way. a great short poet :D

  • 13 years ago

    by keith

    You need more words to make this more powerful.

    but either way. a great short poet :D

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think adding to this, putting more into it is the key. You gave the reader no emotional value or something to feed off of.
    But a very good start

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    Short but powerful poem.

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