Jenni,

This seemed quite dark, and a bit deep,
or is that just my thoughts being interpreted into poems?

But anyways, I liked the wording, seemed sad and hopeless, like aching and just sad

What a really good display of emotion I thought

love
xxx

I had the same feeling some time ago too Jenni. It seems to to me that when feelings dry, our inspiration vanishes.It is a precious piece.Loved it.

What an amazing write this is. I like your imagination a lot, Jenni!!

Great poem:) written by a great writer;)

Your poems are stellar, they always spark the imagination, inspire me to try harder and jump start my creative nature.
Everyone about this was flawless little angel.

Jenni, this poem is deep and dark... and really made me think. The first stanza was raw, and you really captured me with the first stanza.

I like how you express an internal struggle, with poetry I assume?

Very original and different. Well done!

I actually agree with Tara, this poem seemed so deep!!

I LOVED this..your opening stanza was phenominal.....It was so unique, yet well expressed.

The part where you were talking about you helped with the resurrection, that was awesome.

Poems about poetry are my absolute favorite, I always wonder what people can come up with when writing about that subject..yours was so unique.
LOVED!

Woah!

Such a deep and dark poem which has made me think a lot about death generally.

The images - awesome and the first stanza is brilliant. A wonderful way to start the poem and entice people in!

x

This was really dark and really deep the images you set was clear ... the flow was perfect and your word choice was awesome .. dont think ive seen u write so deep 5/5

I love the darkness of this poem, and the choice of words :)