Comments : I Want My Dad

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awwwww love it
    Great poem
    5 x

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I tried editing the poem, below is my edited version

    Heavy drops of rain fall on my face,
    mixing in with the hate
    They bring me to the the days of my youth,
    where i made so many mistakes,

    I thought you would be here my whole life,
    that you would always be my dad
    Never did you care for me,
    nor did the mom you left me with

    You left me to be hated,
    to be beat,
    I felt like life wasn't real,
    like it was all a dream

    How many times did I close
    my eyes and pray I would die?
    Too many to count
    Dad, why did you abandon me?
    I thought i was your one and only son,

    You left me to deal with my fate
    all alone in this world filled with hate,
    blood from my viens
    pouring on the bathroom sink

    So many times I have tried to be frank,
    so many times I have failed to disappear.
    Dad I cry and ask you to hear,
    listen to the sadness of my soul

    For once, i want to be loved in my life,
    i want the sparkle to brighten in my eye,
    i want you to find me
    and bring me to my one true home.

    hope you like it...

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    I love it thanks man

  • 12 years ago

    by Pretty Punk Princess

    It hits home and i can kinda relate to what is said i would love to talk more about it later