Comments : My love

  • 13 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful tribute.

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    The last two lines need to be fixed because they appear unlinked.

    And, capitalize the 'i' s

    other than that, I was surprised with the ending. very good one:)

  • 13 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Thanx guys...@Leba..wil perfect on that

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    The ending surprised me too!!!

    Lovely words

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Amen bro

  • 13 years ago

    by Timothy

    Interesting and sweet, thoroughly enjoyable!

  • 13 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Thanx u all.am glad to av u.