Comments : I Loved Her Once

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its sad, but I love it 5/5:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Paul-

    This piece made me teary.... The emotions within are powerful... well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Thats sad man i am sorry

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Seems to be filled with love and anger at the same time. These are emotions that we can all related too for at some point in our lives this has happened to us.

    ^^^
    so u should feel the pain and suffering

    In the line above I think you should spell out you, rather than use just the letter u.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I could feel your poem, the anger the rage. some can shrug off the feeling and get on with their lives , others live in the memory and the pains of hell consume

    You penned it with perfect emotion.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    On one side it is a love that cannot be forgotten and on the other hand it is a love that created an everlasting pain..a painful write..take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Very well written poem, love the emotions in it 5/5 x

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Just amazing !!

    Of course imma give you a 100/100 babii
    Loved it(:

    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by hisxgurl

    Touchy poem. i like 3rd stanza more....

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Yes i know what you mean & am sure maximum here could relate to it.
    Just sharing what i believe in, 'those who are with you are the ones who love you, those who have left....never did'.

    Very nicely written, you have a quality of expressing yourself with an ease. Great write.

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by The Po whet

    I too loved her once and it was painful to let go of her.
    "I would have erased all the memories from the first day I saw you".
    that line sums it all.
    You wrote this piece intelligently and with emotions.

    beautiful write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow greatly written I loved it and grave emotions shown,,u can feel it all

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    Somehow I knew this piece would have emotion inside of it, to be honest there's nothing I can faulter about your words here because ive been in this place so many times each time more painful than the other, it's so easy though, to wish the pain away with every fabric we have inside us, but even then if it were so it'd be just as painful next time, at least we have our experience to hepl guide us the next time.

    but your poem it shows so much heartache built up inside, almost as if its becoming too much, we'd give anything to not remember things at some point, you portrayed heartache as it is paul, painful! but none of the kids now days wont understand this, not until they grow up and have their heart ripped out because the other person could.

    your favourited, Ive related to all the poems ive read of yours so far. its actually refreshing to see. nicely done dude.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Love can indeed give so much pain... but then it's always better to move. I could feel the frustration and anger in your words. well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Alodia

    Your poem is good ^.^

  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Wow... what a heart break, you penned it so powerfully! in time all will calm down. As I'm sure it did.