Its sad, but I love it 5/5:)

Paul-

This piece made me teary.... The emotions within are powerful... well done~

Thats sad man i am sorry

Seems to be filled with love and anger at the same time. These are emotions that we can all related too for at some point in our lives this has happened to us.

^^^
so u should feel the pain and suffering

In the line above I think you should spell out you, rather than use just the letter u.

I could feel your poem, the anger the rage. some can shrug off the feeling and get on with their lives , others live in the memory and the pains of hell consume

You penned it with perfect emotion.

On one side it is a love that cannot be forgotten and on the other hand it is a love that created an everlasting pain..a painful write..take care.

Very well written poem, love the emotions in it 5/5 x

Just amazing !!

Of course imma give you a 100/100 babii
Loved it(:

xx

Touchy poem. i like 3rd stanza more....

Yes i know what you mean & am sure maximum here could relate to it.
Just sharing what i believe in, 'those who are with you are the ones who love you, those who have left....never did'.

Very nicely written, you have a quality of expressing yourself with an ease. Great write.

all the best and take care

I too loved her once and it was painful to let go of her.
"I would have erased all the memories from the first day I saw you".
that line sums it all.
You wrote this piece intelligently and with emotions.

beautiful write.

Wow greatly written I loved it and grave emotions shown,,u can feel it all

Somehow I knew this piece would have emotion inside of it, to be honest there's nothing I can faulter about your words here because ive been in this place so many times each time more painful than the other, it's so easy though, to wish the pain away with every fabric we have inside us, but even then if it were so it'd be just as painful next time, at least we have our experience to hepl guide us the next time.

but your poem it shows so much heartache built up inside, almost as if its becoming too much, we'd give anything to not remember things at some point, you portrayed heartache as it is paul, painful! but none of the kids now days wont understand this, not until they grow up and have their heart ripped out because the other person could.

your favourited, Ive related to all the poems ive read of yours so far. its actually refreshing to see. nicely done dude.

Love can indeed give so much pain... but then it's always better to move. I could feel the frustration and anger in your words. well written.

Your poem is good ^.^

Wow... what a heart break, you penned it so powerfully! in time all will calm down. As I'm sure it did.