"Making herself bleed the blood"
I love this part, but I dunno how to explain why.

This is really well-written. I just hope all is well with you. Keep writing :) 5/5

-X

Good job. This is amazing piece. I like how you write it. 5/5
~C

I like this.....really good...tells a story in only a few words..great write..5/5

Wow, blew me away!!! 100/100