Dallas don't do this! ur stronger than this!

Stop feeling sorry for yourself and get real you self centered egotistical brat

.....um.... :'( wow thx 4 the critisism ...... and btw im not self centered when i care of everyone well before myself. and im not a brat if i was a brat i would get everything i want and i would be a b**ch but i dont and im not so thus i can not be a brat. dont judge a book by its cover. dont judge me by my poems till youve lived my past

Um, Christopher? Was that really necessary? Grow up.

This was a really good poem
Your writing wat u feel an that makes it amazing love(:

Christopher keep comments like dat to ur self!!

100/100 from me love <3333 x

Dallas goodness girlie, please dont give in! your letting the whole world win!
you have to stay strong
cuz this isnt the end of your song!

please dont, your life isnt over. i swear.

<3

The larger the expectation the larger the hurt. "Anger confuses the thinking process, which, in turn, disturbs memory. When memory fails, reasoning is ruined. And when reason is gone, one is lost" -- Gita, sloka 63

I hope you find some peace

It's a really good poem. it's good to write what you feel. 5/5 from me.

Your parents will always love you even if you do disappoint them. They could never not love you. So you should stay and try to help your sister to not make the same mistakes/choices.
5/5