U-turn monthly..

by Ole Carsten   Feb 6, 2012


I am by now skillful in Europe
Some parts at least
Denmark in spring,
Beech is mirroring in the blue sea.

Germany in fall
Deep forests dark and endless empty
Czech Republic in harvest
Hops and malt for brewing beer

Croatia in summer
Deep blue sea swimming naked..

Slovakia all year
Like you, beautiful, curvy and firm

I like travelling much
But prefer to stay with you

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Thanks for the surprise in comments

    love it
    Ole

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ole, I think this is the best thing you've ever written :)

    I love at first the personification relation between all European countries and you. It's like you really love to go there,,, and I was surprised with the end. !!

    Amazing job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi TJ

    Thanks
    Denmark is flat like a pancake, highest point is 171 meter.
    Therefor a country with mountains and peaks is for me like a woman, curved and dangerous, :)

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You are original :)

    I liked this line:
    "Slovakia all year
    Like you, beautiful, curvy and firm '

    Very cool. I think lots of poems have been written about travel but not in this format...Good job :)

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