Its really sa:(
A really great poem, I love it

Yup, it's a good poem. Many can relate and yeah the feeling of not feeling good enough it's sad :( but yeah we are good enough always. :)

You simplified those moments of despair, when others don't understand or really can't do anything for what we think
I've been there but through the grace of God I'm free.
You're words flowed with painful emotions. Excellent

This poem is really emotional and gripping. I loved how your poured heart into this piece and how you connected with the reader.

"I can't recall the days
where I didn't feel
trapped inside
my own mind."

And

"Perhaps it goes back
to my childhood moments,
where I was left
with broken promises
of friendship
and love."

^ Both of the above stanza's really took my breath away.

I can see you took time with this piece and even though its written in such a simple way the emotion in this poem is so deep it must have been difficult to write

5/5

Awww now listen here, I won't tolerate that kind of attitude sweetheart. EVERYONE is worth something and if there is someone in your past that made you feel that way you have to realize your future is as bright as you want to make it!!

As far as the poem, so sad but still amazing! I absolutely loved the title, when I think triggered I think gun. I thought you were going to describe pulling a trigger. But instead it was about triggered emotions, so creative! Loved this piece!

Although I Strongly do disagree with where you're headed when you were writing this poem. but damn liz you can be quite emotional
and to be able to translate all that emotion with a pen and paper is quite magnificent
this poem is worth a nomination If i had any left
and sure as hell deserves a win
5/5 never the less.

Hi
A great poem, you are touching our souls

Liz,

This piece touched my heart. Ican relate to it in so many ways.Beautiful.

Your words triggered my memory, too... Liz...

You know it wasn't right, my childhood, too.

And you have just brought that again.
I hate you for that, (lol of course not)
and love you for penning another brilliant piece of art. :)

I'm in tears...... Liz, this piece touches me deeply.... touching write indeed....

Awwhh!!! :( This is rather personal, yeah? It's really sad! Easy to understand and relate with - like this stanza, especially;

I can't recall the days
where I didn't feel
trapped inside
my own mind.

Ugh! It's terrible, isn't it!? D:
I like the additional nostalgic feel to it, though it only makes the pout on my face, worsen. Well, that's good poetry for you!
Well-expressed, You poor thing.

Very emotional write. Looks like you wrote your heart out here. The pain and lonliness of childhood sometimes are carried with us even when we are adults. The way you have ended the poem is powerful. Well written and a touching piece.

I think just about every one in the world has felt this way, many people still deal with it now.

love this, beautiful work.

Firexflys