Ohh! very evocative and touching. I can imagine how it feels, wishing for a love but knowing well you're not destined to be. You portrayed the feelings with sympathetic words making it easy to assimilate and imagine. Lovely dear, keep up the exquisite writing of poems. :-) hugs, with lots of care.

Hey girl,

This poem woah.

Although our story has to
end before it even starts
I cant help but to fall for him
even if we are miles apart
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Oh how heartbreaking. This tells me of a love that simply cannot be for whatever reason and it is sad. It sounds as though the love or attraction is going both ways as well.

I love the beautiful image of the birds being in the same nest and going in different directions.

Well penned!!!

x

I cant help but to fall for him
^ remove the 'to'

I LOVE THIS PIECE. I think it's typical yet enchanting, and the contrast in the end is superb!
love the rhyming scheme.

Wow I love this poem! It was soooo sweeeet <3

I could relate to it as well. I'm surprised you didn't post it sooner! It's such a well-written poem.

I love the title, it caught my eye! And I love the story you told in this poem. It was really sweet, and reminded me of a 'Romeo & Juliet' type of story, two people who are from different worlds merging and how it doesn't make sense, even though you wish it did.

I loved it from beginning to end... the first stanza was a great opening, and the ending was fantastic!

Great job sweetie :)

Well if I m not wrong this poem speaks of the pain of the distance from someone close, in terms of words, promises, dreams, reality, responsibilities & still for all, amid the pain.. hopes are still alive dat time n circumstances vl change one day...:) alwys we expect sumthin widout really expecting from sum!, but dat person does exactly d opposite, luvly one...:)

How can it be possible for two
birds to meet in one nest ?
When one is flying east while
the other is heading west

Your these line heart touching
Love your these lines

Truly beautiful! I'm left completely speechless! 5/5

Loved it! Well penned.

Loved it! Well penned.

The end is my favorite part!! :)