Smiles this early in the morning, this is so sweet. I have heard other people call little children crumb snatchers. lol Thank for this wonderful, cute little poem. So refreshing.

TJ, haha... I like the whole idea and the ending. It's really smile widening :)

Its cute, I really like it. Also thanks for the note about your mom calling.. I was thinking you liked to play with the cookie crumbs and name each one of them.

Awhh this is so cute. . . its a nice read that fills the heart with memories of all the little ones in my life :)

Hehe :D I loooOVE this poem it's very delightful and funny and amazing...greatly written mr. Poet :) everythings fantastic 5/5

Hahaha TJ,

Before I read the little note on the end I was like hug crumbs? I'd rather eat the leftovers, no need to waste! Lol
Then of course I had seen your note and was like wow it makes even more sense now that you're talking about adorable bubs
A short but lovely poem that certainly made me smile!!!

Well done TJ!!!

x

Aww! That is just too sweet.
Very nice flow and wonderful rhyme.
Smiles all round for this one.
Keep them coming. (:

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh this is precious!!!!! I would love to read this poem to my grand babies.... such a sweet and loving write, well done~

Great poem my King.Loved it.

Hehehe after I read the note I read the poem again :D yeah I too was wondering why hug a crumb :P then it all made sense :D
very cute poem :D lovely

Such lovely and captivating imagery. Nice write TJ, i read it twice before assimilating it. Evocative, actually was wondering what gave birth to this short but awesome read. ADMIRABLE!

Lol:) I LOVE this poem it made me laugh:)

Sweet Cookie Crumbs

This has got to be the SWEETEST poem I have ever read TJ.
Me too, if it wasnt for that ending note I wouldve been confused to what you were refering too.

It certainly put a smile on my face today, thanks for that.
:)

This is proppr cute man gd job

This poem is different because of the personal tone and what it reveals about the character of your mum. A very loveable lady with a big heart:)

Well done, son.

5/5 Ingrid

AWWWW this is sooo sweeet, nice poem :)

This is creative and sweet as it has been said before. I really like how when you write you use so few words but they create perfect pieces.

Great poem well done you got talent keep up the good writing again i like this poem

Good piece of work short and sweet i really liked the detail and imagination and creativity out of the ordinary. you know t.j the famous irish poet patrick kavanagh wrote that beauty is "plenty ordinary" keep up your good work