Comments : Love is filled with pain

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Love is painful. But we all want this suffering.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It's a pain that we can't live without. A pain we look for when a lone.
    I think you penned that well

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Loves are harmful
    Loves are waist
    It is so painful
    Really painful

    I think you meant waste rather then waist..
    Indeed, love is painful but totally worthy because the pain only makes it stronger.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks all, and yes it is waste
    I believe for me, the swings in motions from joy to sorrow will always be a part of me, maybe unpreditable

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    Wow. "Love is filled with bruises" - love this line. The way the word "love" is followed by a dark, negative word is certainly oxymoronic and praise-worthy indeed!! I enjoy your poetry, a lot!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Timothy

    I am very happy for your detailed comments, I try hard to be slightly better, up to my current skills.
    Kindly
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    You are dark in this poem, it gives me chill down the spine

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Yes it is a dark poem, and refects an emotion
    thanks for the comment

    br
    Ole