Comments : 11

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    If I had one vote left, it would be yours.Perfect piece my friend.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This poem is great, everything is perfect I love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    Comment...removed as requested.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm mesmerized by this piece... the depths of sadness are very deep....and your word usage is wow.... well done Timothy~

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Honestly, Timothy ... :P
    I don't understand what's this about, dude... so if you could pm me.. :)

    but I really like the end, and I feel it's about something great!

  • 12 years ago

    by neon sunset

    Love the poem. it's great. - if you will please comment on some of mine