I fell through time, space, egg and chick,
after London's clock continued to tick.
^^
this is my fav stanza:)
Great poem:)

Brilliant!

Timothy-
Your word usage is refreshing.... I love this piece... in many ways it reminds me of insomnia and in the late, midnight hour, the mind dances and plays tricks on the mind... that's where i went with this piece... very very nice... I love poems that take my mind on a powerful journey... well done~

Stellar!

Timothy :)
What can I say about you and your ultimate creativeness?

Okay. I don't know if it's true, but I think you were inspired from the movie Hugo or something?

I love the incorporation of time, hours, pendulums, clockwork and everything related to clocks.

I understood that you used to fix clocks and after years, you can still see everything as a clock, running.......

And at the end, it's like waking up from some kind of dream as you're watching Big Ben?

Ugh... so many things, but I like how you really entice me each time.

AMAZING

Great poem Timothy!

I have read most of your writes and I must say the imagery and the wordings are very creative, very original and have always left me in awe. Frankly some of the metaphors are still mystery to me. :)

Ok let me put my interpretation here -
I felt like you are watching your memories fly by ... remembering things ... Good , bad and the mistakes you have done in your life.

/where the old lady sits knitting my future,
// here I feel you are talking about destiny or fate

I might be way off from your actual meaning :) but do tell me if I am anywhere close to what you mean. :)

A brillaint write, as usual :)

I love your style and wording. It's not the normal poetic write but deeper more creative. Not that other styles aren't good :) better clear that up quick. But I enjoy the difference in yours.
Great flow, great wording and brilliant overall