Once upon
A memory
my mind was
a hypocrite,
teaching others
to love life
when instead I
was leaning
on the idea,
of going fading
into somewhere
unknown..

This is my fav stnza..and dis poem is agn a strng write ,like othr poems of urs..fp

Ugh, mary-anne
this is too beautiful for words..

Jeezus its so refreshing to read poems such as these, it almost seems like a song because of how easily it flows.
I like the pattern of "once upon"
at the beginning of each stanza,I love it..

this is just so positive and uplifting...
I also found the first stanza to be very deep.
and I love the imaginary...

ugh..
too many things to love here...
so gorgeous.

I enjoyed the honesty and depth of this piece

MaryAnne, I consider your words like a soothing lullaby to my ears.
I love your figurative language and style... and your smooth pace. Really wonderful :)

MaryAnne my dear,
I loved this,

Each stanza flowed so well, so smooth and soulfull and the wording was beautiful,
plus I could relate to this so well which is always an added bonus.

Once upon
A memory
my mind was
a hypocrite,
teaching others
to love life
when instead I
was leaning
on the idea,
of going fading
into somewhere
unknown
^^^^^^^^
I loved this stanza the most, I love how you say "leaning on the idea", as if you were sort of resting yourself there, halfway between giving up but still wanting to stay for you knew the chance was there.

Really moving,
such a strong inspirational piece

Loved it :)

xxxx

Once upon a chamce, Im in love with this poem^_^

great poem :)