My Valentines Day Wish

by Angel   Feb 15, 2012


She sits alone in the back of the class,
Knowing that she will always be last.

She looks down to check her phone,
Wishing that she wasn't alone.

She heard a faint sound and her eyes rose,
And behold on her desk was a single rose.

She looked around to see from whom it came,
But everything looked exactly the same.

Then she noticed a little heart shaped note,
She didn't realize she picked it up cause it seemed to float.

"My darling little Angel would you please be mine?
I just want to love you and be you're valentine.

Please won't you say yes,
And i promise to treat you the best.

Meet me here right after school,
Right beside the shallow pool.

For i have a surprise for you,
And many more roses too.

I cannot wait for when,
I can see you then."

She put the card down and her eyes became teary,
Then her body became faint and she felt weary.

She thought to herself could this really be?
Is someone really in love with me

Finally she decides to try.
Hoping it wasn't a lie.

What do you think will happen next?? i really have no idea how to end it considering there are so many different ways i could end it. think you guys can help out a bit PLEASE?? Check out the discussion page under contests if you wanna help out thanks :)
-Angel

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Oooh...that truly caught my breath,a kinda of description u made step-by-step with a rythmic manner; really I felt the valentine touch!
    For a moment I was lost inside ur poetry...

  • 12 years ago

    by Merci Perpe

    I love it!! Too bad I didn't read this earlier, I might've used that idea XD great poem!