This poem is so sweet!

I love the first stanza - such a beautiful image. There are a lot of beautiful images in this poem.

It is sweet yet there is that hint of sadness that this was only a day dream :(

I hope you find this person some day :)

x

I did, she is my heaven, but even in love on the 17 month, life is turning new pages each day

Just keep in mind that dreams can come true. :)
I like the flow of the poem and the simple words.

I would swallow all negative
Words ever spoken out loud
In exchange for seconds with you
Or to taste a drop of a kiss

^ Thats what makes someone a sweet person..beautifully written

I thought a couple places needed a comma to break up the wording, but other than that this was a such a sweet dedication , or "dream" so to speak and I loved it from beginning to end!

Ole,

Your love is beautiful.

Thanks for the kind comments, I like them, all of them.

love
Ole