Comments : And I asked myself..Why?

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Well the spanish words are more aesthetically appealing but the message is the same in both instances. I loved the ending, seems as though your Mother wants you to take flight from the nest and you are screaming that you don't know how to fly, you very well may be a land creature and never sprout the wings it takes to fly.
    My personal advice is you will never know who you are unless you try to fly first. You very well may be a caterpillar whom at first doesn't fly but transforms into a beautiful creature that spreads its wings and soars with the wind. The caterpillar doesn't "know" the transformation of what will become. You are in a cocoon stage right now so to speak, with reality of what you will become blocking your view. Whatever it is you become in life, it will be done with passion and certainty. For you are Yaki, and too much like me in my own insecurities.

  • 12 years ago

    by Pain

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Shadow

    Nice! I liked it.