The title caught my attention.

Breathe of remorse,
I found it really powerful.

Just one minor thing that I found while reading.
There is a small typo

"that consumes thier offers for deities."
Thier to their if I'm not mistaken.

Overall, enticing piece.

Your piece is food for thought. I really liked it. It gave me chills. Great poem my friend.

Thanks for your comments, Karla and Everlasting. I'm humbly grateful, as well as notifying me on the error. Blessing to you both, :-) ..

This piece drew me In.... the feelings it pulled within me, made me speechless.... your word usage was captivating... well done~

Thanks Andrea, for the words of praise. Adios! :-) ..