Comments : What's So Good About Love?

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Questions that most have asked before at one time or another. Nice write, I liked the format and the wording..Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I often ask myself those questions. The fact is that love is nourishment. It nurtures and changes.Lovely poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    There is somebody for everybody. Put your trust in God, he will bring you that special
    person when you are rady and when the time is right.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Good job indeed.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Sad poem, this poem is very sweet and sad at the same time. My favorite stanza is ...

    "Do I have some kind of anti-love
    disease ?"

    Love is a very complicate thing, but when it's sincere and genuine it's the most beautiful things to know and have.

  • 12 years ago

    by Broken girl143

    Everyone feels like that trust me i feel the same way dont give up and keep you head held high

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I am still crying after your poem, this a full load of emotions some unleashed some not

    I like it

    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Truly amazing.
    actually, you sound alot like my old friend. gosh i miss him.

    either way, amazing poem. keep writing, okay?

  • 11 years ago

    by Stupified

    We love this poem it express so much. You will find the girl your looking for eventually ^^

    Have hopes up :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Shifzy

    A very good write :)
    from the heart. 5 on 5!
    keep up :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I feel this way sometimes. I think we all do at some point. The thing is, you don't really get that kind of connection until you've really connected emotionally and developed that bond. It's hard, it takes time, but it's worth it.

    I liked your poem. It was filled with mixed emotions; a longing for love, anger, sadness, and even self pity. Poems like this are the ones which drive people to relate and live through the experience.

    I think what you need in your poems is spacing, because it helps understand the idea, is easy on the eyes and it gives drama to your poems. Maybe you need some rhythm, you can use rhyme, synonyms, or more metaphors.

    You're on the right track though, keep it up, and keep writing. :)