Idk why, but I love this. It's so much fun and straightforward. Great job, hun.
5/5
-Heather

Deep-lovely write

The images and metaphors have been done so well in this poem.
Sometimes we can't do things in life if our heart does not allow us to, no matter what is protecting us.

Our heart is what we usually follow...

Awesome poem!!!

x

Beautıfully pınned, as I was readıng thıs, ı couldn't help but ımagıne the depth of thıs poem, the way you used the sheıld ıs stunınıngly very accurate, at fırst, you'd actully love the ıdea behınd havıng an armor because ıs makes you feel dıffrent, makes you feel safe and stronger, but as the wheel of tıme takes ıt's turn ıt eventully becomes a burden, a burden that may leave you as the decender of the pack.
It's just what I ımagıned whıle readıng, but what you wanted to convery may be dıfferent,
A remarkable read never the less, 5\5 and a nomınatıon.

This is an evocative piece, it reminds me of the epic series, Spartacus. The gladiators will to surpass all obstacles laid out is an act of bravery. I like how the twist at the end evolved. With all the dedication to succeed, emotions took over, consuming the subject. I'm marvelled at your creativity. Very vivid imagery, penned with lovely words. Excellent job dear, keep up the good work. Blessings, hugs. ;).

The images were amazing deep i love it 5/5

Bravo Bravo:) loved the images.
Your flow was flawless and your words kept the reader full of enjoyment..Excellent

Are you trying to kill me, with your latest poems!
I definitely went to read this, due to its title, remind me of a movie lol.

Sarah, this was amazinf, the description, the way you put your words...is very unique, like you have your own style, i think you even invent a certain medium for yourself!

But as I start to stumble and lose sight,
I realize how heavy my armor is,
it is more than half my weight
and is decelerating my speed.
Oh armor, save me from this.

^^
how did you come uppp with THAT !!
Wonderful art.