Superb. Loved the flow and the image. Excellent piece my friend.

Thanx

Shanky-

what a creative and thought provoking piece you have written...simply wonderful!! I adore small pieces that pack a punch, and this poem is filled with deep undertones! well done my friend...

I really like this piece though I can't really arrange my ideas yet. But they are there somewhere just wanting to be heard... Awesome write that's all I can say at the moment.

This is full of poetic verve, your style is unique and awesome. This to me seems like elders talking in parables, rather an elder on a, one on one discuss. The subject is passing a message across, not to hurry up and take what's not your share. Always get or do things according to your destiny not selfish purpose. Don't take what's not yours, because you might not know what trouble you're getting yourself into. I'm inspired by your poems, such an educative piece. Nice wordings and imagery. Won-Der-FULL! Keep it up! Blessings to you.

Aaaaw:-) thanx guys.