Comments : Nakedness existed before the body

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I agree entirely with you.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Life is a necessary precaution like the shadow for the tree.

    I'm trying to grasp the significance of this line.
    I don't think that by shadow you are referring to the shadow of the tree rather about when the sun is out. It's a precaution so it doesn't dehydrate? 

    Or the shadow is there to tell
    The tree that time is moving on?
    Would you care to explain? :)

    So our life is a precaution to remember us that we are alive
    And that we are an awesome creation yet so harmful?

    Nakedness existed before the body.
    And at times the body remembers it. 

    --- I agree with this part. 
    But the upper is tricky.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    The title drew me in... so philosophical, it felt. And it's like music to my ears.... brilliantly penned.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Great piece