The theme is quite a sensitive subject. And forcing someone into submission of a sexual act is extremely cruel. The scene of such an act may not allow the victim of actually lead a normal life for an exceptional period of time.

Awwww im soo sorry

Castration to anyone that should do such a thing. I'm sorry about what you went through but in writing about it helps ease the pain..Take care

If only we could change 'past'.

Well, am glad that you are on this site and releasing as much as you could.

all the best and take care

I dnt know what to say ... my blood boils at the thought that such men walk free while the victim is left to suffer. I hope a better future awaits you. And you must be very brave to put that in words.

Good write. very short. very emotional. good poem.

Rape is so common here in South Africa- it sickens me . It is such a violent crime and rapists often walk free here . It breaks my heart .........because its not natural to violate another human being ........this is so touching . X

I love that you wrote about your horrible experience... i understand your pain and hurt because ive gone through it many times... You captured the exact emotions almost perfectly. Truly splendid read my dear. 5/5

This is a good and powerful poem about a horrific event. You have captured your emotions well and penned them very clearly.

I have a suggestion to add a bit more power to the poem :

I was left crying
But you didnt care i felt like i was dying

- the ending to your poem could be stronger by simply sperating the last line into two different lines like this :

I was left crying
But you didnt care

I felt like i was dying.

- For me this just puts emphasis on how much this affected you and the reader is left with that last statement knowing clearly how you felt during this awful time.

Good job on this.

Is this a true story?
If it is, I feel so sorry for you!I've been mildly sexually assaulted.
If it isn't, Great poem!