I am
but a
solitaire
awaiting my
advocate

Thats a definiton that could be applied to so many people. We are always forever for our advocates: somebody who will defend us regardless of our mistakes. In the end we are broken dreamers expecting that somebody could mend our pieces or give us a different shape. Great work.I really liked it.

I loved the reference to being a "broken dreamer". You painted such a lovely picture with your words. Word choice was amazing as always. Exceptional piece of writing you have penned.

I really love the overall flow of the poem, you words: "frementing star, gingerly waiting" are very original! Nicely done. :)

Excellent 5/5.. simply short, simple and beautiful..

Lovely imagery .........sweet write