Comments : The Blood Countess (Elizabeth Bathory)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nicely done, seamless and that is a good thing. The blood countess, a female serial killer and never convicted, but banished from society. Borne into a weathly family, makes you wonder what happened to cause her to be this way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Seems this is about a serial killer in reality ages ago. I love how you described her persona; a ruthless lady with a thirst for extreme blood from the innocent. You use deep, dark and suicidal words to portray how her wrath burns and rips lives apart. A very powerful piece written with such eloquence as usual of you. Blessings to you. Cheers!

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    My King

    what a wonderful piece. I loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome, Awesome poem.

    Filled with lots of dark images. It flows so well and the rhyming is awesome. Not forced.

    Such a good poem!!! Loved it

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    What a beautifully darkened poem,,, it's really bloody tempting :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was absolutely awesome, its like a cradle of filth song. great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Magnificent and amazing,,,a brilliant write with great everything I love love loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi TJ¨
    What a horror story covered in poems, love it not the content, that is a bit to bloody

    five

  • 11 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I haven't really been on the site properly for a really long time and this was the first poem I've read since coming back and wow!! Thank you for still writing the most amazing masterpieces, your talent has just kept on getting better.

    You know, you're so talented and gifted. Very few people can write in so many different genre's and still be absolutely amazing no matter what it is.

    Reading your poems is a gift to everyone:) hope you're doing well TJ:) (I still have the same issue with the site ... They STILL only have a voting scale of up to 5 which seriously is an insult to your incredible talent.)

    Well done for yet another AMAZING poem:)