by Maple Tree
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Beautiful!!! I'm picturing a black stallion, running wild within a midnight breeze under the moonlight..... (thats the vision I just had)... Love the imagery.... |
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I love the imagery so much... |
by Sylvia
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It is obvious from the image your words give the reader that you love this horse very much. I can see you in my minds eye, sitting astride Viper with you and he running as fast as you can, wind blowing around you, enjoying the freedom of the ride and nature. Amazing how 3 lines can give so much information. Well done. |
by Lioness
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What a beautiful Haiku. I absolutely LOVE horses they are gorgeous and yes very majestic. |
by Ms Happiness
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Wow I love Haiku and this piece is amazing:) |
by L
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I love haikus and this one has an amazing imagery. |
by L
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Double post |
by L
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Sorry, I have bad connetion. Triple post. |
by Lonely Rider
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Reminds me of Black Beauty ... brilliantly described :D short pieces yet you managed to add lively imagery :D as always :D |
by Decayed
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TJ, I love horses. And I know you ride them, right? |
by Karla
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Beautiful my King.Bravo. |
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I love the title :) and the poems good,,written by a great poet |