I love the imagery.

I see an exotic lady under the twilight envelope by the tune of her music. Dancing to a ritual belly dance thus rejuvenating her spirit.

The t.... format is so lovely, gave a beautiful shape to the poem. Your mind rocks dear, you're really amazing.
KUDOS! Bless you.. :)

Amazing job, I love ur poetry:)

Oh wow this is gorgeous. The image of the gems and she's dancing. I love how you used golden gems like the sun dancing under the full moon. Awesome!!!

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It's very hard to get any kind of real imagery into this style of poetry (which is probably why I don't bother) but you've done a remarkable job here. They say a picture paints a thousand words, but these few words paint quite a picture!

Oooh, exotic and entrancing! I like this piece!
It's like you can feel the rhythm and the poem flows gracefully with it! Great write, Maple. :)

5/5

You mastered a great form . Well done

I love Gypsy Dance. It is fanatastic.There is nothing more beautiful than Gypsy Dance and Bharatanatyahm.Both are part of me.Awesome piece, sista.

Brilliant write contained in this short form . Good flow throughout.

Brilliant write contained in this short form . Good flow throughout.