The last stanza blew me away. Stunning piece Jenni.Exalt.

I have to agree with Karla, Stunning piece that grabs the heart and tenders it all the way through a perfect read.
Excellent

Wow, powerful poem.

It really exposes your emotions and thoughts that's why I love it so much.

It's like all your thoughts are there and you want to get everything out.

Awesome

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Ya it is a powsrful poem:)
Great poem:)

Ouch for a poem

hard to read without emotions bubbles

this line is a kill
like nothing with a bit of comfort.

Amazing write jen really captivating
strong and powerful

Loved all this poem from start to end and I agree with the above that this poem is really captivating.

I loved how each staza followed on from the one before so well. The whole poem just went together so effortlessly.

5/5

Strong poem i can really relate :]

Nicely written. dark and full of emotion

Sorry, double post.