Sad poem, throughout this piece one could feel the pain that the author expresses. The author is telling the readers a story without details. I like it because it makes me think about what was actually drawn upon the canvas board... Good poem

A tender taatoo

wauh you kick asses here, new ways of makeing punchlines, great poem.
sadly like I a couple a misspellings
BUT A GREAT FIVE....
love
Ole

Woow first of all the title really took my atention, Im glad that I stoped and read this, cuz its amazing:)

That was so melodic; I love the blue moon.

Awesome Karla,

I love this, such sadness but the flow was awesome. The rhyming was great and natural.

I love what you have done here hun

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Love love love this form of poetry! Never wrote one like this! But your poem inspired me to try....what's difficult is you have to make your repeating lines makes sense since they are in the last stanza together.

I think u did a great job and I love the phrase "when the moon was so blue"..usually people look to the moon for light in the darkness, but what creates a sad tone in ur poem is the fact that the moon is blue, sad...loved it

I'm out of words. This is just...,.i'm out of words again. You're truly an inspiration. God bless you Aunt, Kudos!

Wonderfully Done Karla, Splendid Work.