Comments : Beneath the Tongue of Injustice

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This poem is really great:)
    I love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Perfect title, and perfect write.
    It speaks of true society in an awesome poetic language.

    Injustice.. I think you're trying to tell us of the injustice a group is being dealt with. Your questions are awesome, and this part,,, oh my:

    Slung in bodies and forced to rent a voice;
    do we ever learn from what we never learn?

    What of it now then?
    Seven of my children, and counting,
    are rotting for your totting sun - Schadenfreude.

    ^ Great write, bro.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Timothy bro,

    Stellar!Exalt!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Really harsh ready, but what a flow
    you are making a breakthrough with the style

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Great poem, I like the fact that this poem touches on the reality that minorities and many other faces.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love this!

    The meaning behind this poem, loved it!!!

    I had to look up the word Schadenfreude and I believe it fits this poem very well.

    Awesome write

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This set the tone right from "our slavery here". HERE. In poetic terms, that's very global. I am genuinely impressed by this. Not much sociopolitical writing makes me smile with pleasure, but it seems you have a mastery of the subject material and an eye for imagery that gives this poem so much depth that I can truly say I'm inspired. Inspired: no word of a lie!