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by Ole Carsten   Feb 27, 2012


A lightning stroke my heart
Flashed through my soul
Made an eternal mark

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for a very kind comment, much appriciated

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Short and sweet!
    I really like it and it gave me the feel like this piece can be a great beginning for an awesome piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi little miss happines
    thanks for the kind comment, I really like you kind way you are for commenting me

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Short but strong , ur choice of words r gd:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Loved it because your words are true. I like dhow you manged to make a point with only a few lines.

    5/5

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