Beautiful.... the majestic glory of stars and constellations is breathtaking and you have captured the beauty with this piece... The spiritual elegance is captured within this pretty poem... really love this piece Liz...

I also find when I'm meditative and see the beauty of the universe and how perfect it is ...........that one feels the presence of God. I enjoyed this write

What a lovely poem. I liked how you kept the topic light. This is simply beautiful.

5/5

Beautiful...I used to lie down in the garden when I was a child and contemplate the constellations. Loved it Liz.

This poem reminded me of when I used to sleep at my grandma's house. We would sit in the second floor and there was a bed outside of the rooms. Where we could just lay there and watch the sky. My grandpa would tell us stories about the sky and sometimes about witches. So many good memories. Great poem.

Liz, I just saw this, I missed such a beautiful piece which incorporates childhood memories, fatherly lessons and constellations part.

I love how you opened this. I was totally sucked in.
And the question in the end, it's so provoking.
I'm mesmerized with this a lot..

Wishing on a star.
The beauty around us we fail to see in the day, is evident at night,

a very thought provoking ending, as you know, I love questions in poems...

Beautiful piece of poetry Liz, as always
xxx

I am a little late so I think all has been said that applies to this awesome poem. Interesting filled with images that reach the minds eye. Great flow good job :)