Oh this poem is filled with a lot of awesome but sad images.

I read it a couple of times to take it all in and loved it.

For me it was about not being comfortable in your own home? Your home should be your shelter and safe place but from what I am gathering this was not the case.

I could be wrong but this was an awesome read.

x

Awesome piece my friend.Nominated.

Thanks alot for the comments, Lioness and Karla.. I'm grateful.. :)

Home-such an awesome progression to where you find shelter -in the warmth and love of a home . Excellent !

Excellent just excellent

Thanks TJ...blessings to u... :)

Yakori-

You always know how to make me have goosebumps within your poetry.... well done!!!! this piece is captivating with elegance and love for your home.....

Great poem! I like your choice of words :)