"Correct me"
The title is great and fits perfectly:)
This poem is amazing, I like how thT person taight u many things, then he does the exact opposite thing:)
Great poem Chels:)

I am dizzy by reading this, 110 % blurred in a fantastic world of your imagination, keep on writing like this, had such a wonderful time reading it, and then ...
sadly you stopped in defining a wonderful thing. brilliant for me

5, five, high five
love
Ole

Well personally, I define Love as an overwhelming attitude of kindness, sustained through endurance.. You are rather willing to take every undeserving blame @ the interest of others than yourself; just to put things in the right place.. It's more or less, a sacrifice than gain.. Maybe, you may have to consult some other person's idea on this, rather than mine, anyway.. But, thanks all the same, for opting to share this.. Much enjoyed the read, however. Keep doing more..

The ingredients of friendship is well contained in this poem -loyalty/decency/respect/trust-unconditional love . Beautiful !

Kudos to you Chels, for this piece is so modern, handling a current topic which is brilliantly described. I like the idea of losing faith in friends.. the closest people. We're being so picky now (I myself) to chose friends, for you think you know them, but suddenly they show you their ass.

I like the opening, and then the incorporation of this proverb:

"Love your neighbor as you do yourself"

^ I think if you have to love your neighbor like you love your friend. Smart usage, to show that friends are loved without being told to love them. Nice comparison!

And then, the subtle rhymes in the 3rd and 4th stanzas are perfect.

I need to elaborate on this bomb because it's super epic:

When once I found comfort in you,
now I find strength in mere thoughts.

^ WOW! totally true.. people used to cling to people to find comfort, but now people are being a source of discomfort. And so, what is left to comfort us? THOUGHTS. We cling to them. If they're bright, they brighten our lives. If they're not. They can doom us.

BEAUTIFUL VERSE.

Thoughts that give me hope.
Hope that someone like you is out there,

^ Here, I love the repetition of thoughts and hope.

but someone who goes through with
what they define in a friendship.

^ however, I don't feel that the ending is strong. Maybe you should change it, but that doesn't affect my feelings of what preceded this.

AMAZING, CHELS
Keep it up

Stunning piece my friend.

Oh man this poem sums up most of my past relationships.

I loved it. Loved it!!!

x

Correct me, Fits the poem perfectly.
Its catchy and intriguing.

Correct me, If I'm wrong...

I like that stanza the most.
This poem really makes one think about what we do and what we teach other people intentionally or not. Though, its sad when we find out that the one that taught us doesn't implement it. But just because they don't implement it, it doesn't mean that we shouldn't. It just depends from person to person.

Loved everything from the title to the last line. This poem says alot about broken loyalty and how people abuse our trust.

A deep, honest write.

5/5