Comments : The Craving

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Your style of writing just captivates me..how you manage to make the sentences work and just flow so smoothly, i cant describe. And its evident in this piece that you really know what you are doing when you write.

    I like how you start this piece with accepting that you know you want his affection. You continue to express emotions throughout the piece and how you end it is remarkable. Nominated

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Liz

    awesome write,
    It's a love poem. This time I checked the category.
    it's really good and sad too. I dont know what to write because the poem is self explain. I like how you write. Everything ties up or down. It makes perfect sense.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Beautiful, I really love the emotions you have poured into this write.. so organic and comforting.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Liz, I read this one on my break at work and didn't have time to comment,
    but I must say I loved this piece, such beauty and amazing words, expressions and emotion was inticing and sensual yet romantic and nude.

    The feeling washes
    above me like a sun
    shower which
    always manages
    to keep me warm.
    ^^WOW!! The expression "sun shower" blew me away, lovely image and great metaphors for love

    Great piece as always,
    I love the change in genre, you write beautifully

    love
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, I must admit I like how you brought this piece together. Sensual, tender, and sweet all in one.

    Great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Liz,
    Another smashing poem by you. So beautiful and completely faultless.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Liz-

    Mercy... such a beautiful love poem....

    "The feeling washes
    above me like a sun
    shower which
    always manages
    to keep me warm."

    ^^^ what an elegant, soft, and touching stanza....

    a touch of sadness.... however elegantly written.... beautiful piece~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good work

    The feeling washes
    above me like a sun
    shower which
    always manages
    to keep me warm

    This one is very nice

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Nomination :0)