The life without you..

by Dark   Mar 8, 2012


Please heed my words for it will always be true..
all the things i feel is all because of you..

no words can explain .. no one can define..
this is what it seems, i live for you..

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  • 12 years ago

    by tiger girl

    The first three lines are great and quite strong, i found the last line to not flow so much with the rest of it. The i live for you part i think is what's thrown me off but i think could work better if you came up with a fifth line or an alternative.

    Still i enjoyed it :) Keep up the good work

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