Woo hoo!!! Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant!

Karla I simply love this. Such in depth images, the rawness and beauty.

I could feel sensual parts of the poem as well as I was reading. Part of me was like bite her give her what she wants.

I simply loved it. I love the ending, who needs them after midnight... awesome ending to a magnificent poem.

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Haha.. I like the last part the most.

Heroes,
Who needs them after midnight?

I do agree with Liz, there are some parts where I was thinking the same as her and also a few sensual parts. I love it!

My lovely neck wanted a vampire,
somebody sent me a hero instead.
Drink my poisoned blood, I thought.
My soul was trembling with awe.
Can a weird desire scratch and stain
his blind lens?

I really like this poem describing what you thought ..and i love the blind lens lines.... and a question mark...brillant....

I love this poem. . and i agree, it had a nice ending, good poem Karla :)

I Love This!It's A Perfect Fantasty Poem!

Karla this was absolutely amazing! I was so caught up in this like I was reading a book! I didn't want this poem to end, but when it did end, the lst few stanzas were my favorite part!!! Love love loved it!! Very mystical! And as the girls said definitely sensual! I love what u did with this idea. Your creativity is awesome!

A poem about want and desire, searching. And then did you find your hero, or not, did you even need one. Very sensual and evoking. I liked it a lot.

Oh wow... now I'm really loving this piece Karla- just wow!! very nice ~

Awesssssome :) soo creative, so wonderful, this is very catchy and descriptive :)