Wow speachless

Very sad:(Nice lines!

I read it and only when reading it again did I notice a few errors. Powerful poem.

"shall feel the most viscous wrath"
->should be vicious

"it will never end until your dead"
-> should be you're

But all in all, a very captivating poem.
5/5 from me :)

-X

Dark and Great, nice going.
-Shadow

Thx glad you like it :D