Comments : Enchanted

  • 12 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    This is very good but Jst to mention in verse one line three is it meant to read "and one will be left behind" not "and one will left behind"?

  • 12 years ago

    by tiger girl

    Lovely poem, very beautiful. Don't really understand the first stanza in relation to the rest of poem, might just be me as i havn't slept in a week. Well done, love the title very appropiate

  • 12 years ago

    by Shadow

    Great poem! Gave me something to think about. Thanx
    -Shadow

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark

    Thx glad you like it :D