by Rowena Smith
This is very good but Jst to mention in verse one line three is it meant to read "and one will be left behind" not "and one will left behind"? |
by tiger girl
Lovely poem, very beautiful. Don't really understand the first stanza in relation to the rest of poem, might just be me as i havn't slept in a week. Well done, love the title very appropiate |
by Shadow
Great poem! Gave me something to think about. Thanx |
by Dark
Thx glad you like it :D |