Ole

You are the king of sweet words.Loved it.

Sensual yet sweet, I like how you relates making love to dancing I think that this piece flows well and keep the reader attention. Good poem

Wow, this piece shows profound and powerful feelings yet you formed it in a sweet and delicate way
I loved it, well done :)

Hi Mostafa

What a kind comment, thanks a lot

Love this poem, great work

Thanks for the kind comment
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Ole